My feet hit the pavement,
pounding out fragmented thoughts,
interupted by momentary silence.
I inhale jagged breaths,
freezing fire prickles my lungs,
daggers of distracting strain.
Step by step my problems resolve,
like myriad drops of sweat,
They drain out as I run away.
Please tell me what you think
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this is really descriptive. i like it a lot.
and you seem to have improved a lot since i first read a poem of yours. you've kind of broadened your... something.
p.s. where have you been? come back to AP.
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