I see you standing above me,
looking down upon me.
I cringe in your prescence,
Im tired of your essence.
Each word is a stab in the
back.
Your tongue is sharp,
each word that comes out of
your mouth slices my heart like a knife,
I want you out of my life.
Your eyes peirce my soul
until there is nothing left.
I try to look away,
but you hold my gaze until you walk away.
I cant move in your prescence,
you keep me in one place,
I cant speak,
for you have sewn my mouth shut.
I pray you go away,
But you do not,
and when I pray you stay,
You turn around and walk away.
You think you are helping,
but you are not.
You thnk you can change me
into something I dont want,
Yet you help me to find the light,
and help me take flight.
You open the door to my prison,
you have freed me from my dungeon.
Yet you are not a freind of mine.
You pretend not to care,
but you cant help but stare.
This torture I cannot bare.
And then I understand who you are,
a dragon of mine....
So divine,
you are only mine
for the rest of time.
And you tell me,
You werent trying to hurt me,
you were trying to free me from my pain.
And you tell me that was the only way,
and beg me to stay.
And when you left,
I felt empty inside,
but as I promised,
I stay waiting for your return,
when we can once again
live in paradise,
together for eternity,
never to seperate again.
Comments
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Gal
this is one interesting piece you have peened. Kind of like ancient belifs I think. The spirit? Who knows what form it takes?
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Aww. I like it.
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Holy Wow
Summer this is probably your best *bunny* poem ever!!!! oh my gosh, you know I never picture as a major writer (your the artist) but this is like something that I'd see from more . . . in-to-it writers. I'm so blow away! god job!
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What I see here (forgive me if I am wrong) are all the conflicting thought processes going in inside the head of someone in an abusive relationship. They swing back and forth.
This is quite effective, and confidently written, apart from one or two spelling mistakes.
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