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Hold Fast

Dear one,

Forget the ache you feel
learn from your past mistakes
but never dwell,
                          you'll fall unwell,
unless you learn to Be.

Forgive me.

I gave a hand-
when I should have
merely given space.

Collapse into my arms,
remember my embrace.

Courage.

Hold fast.  Relieve the past.
Recall my love

for you.
                       

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 28, 2008

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    This is a beautifully soft poem... I like the sentiments that you express so well here... the formatting was well linked to the poem and made it flow that little bir more smoothly... wonderful!

    Keep writing

    Polly


    • SilverInk
      March 28, 2008
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      thank you so much, you always seem to find time to leave comments, that's super nice i appreciate it