Why is it that
you're always
the number one
thing on my mind?
Every time
you're with me
I couldn't
be happier
but when
you're not
I hold back
tears.
It's sad,
how we could be
apart a short
time and
I already
miss you madly.
Every time
you hold me,
I pray you
never let go.
Each kiss
is like the
touch of an angel.
The sun that
broke apart
the storm clouds.
The most
wonderful person,
because of
everything you are,
ahold of
my heart.
A contest entry
- Poem to Put on wall, pretty much anything. see rules! prewrites = :) by Midgetbridgey.
300 points, ended July 11, 2008, 38 entries
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Nice work... its sweet... you're so cute... I'm really glad you can write about good in falling in love now.
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thanks i apreciate the comment.
Um, sorry had to ask this; i don't understand the cute part
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Why is it that
you're always
the number one
thing on my mind?
... sorry can't explain it but I find that cute...
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sounds really good baby, i really like it i can tell it took a bit
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thanks baby
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I can feel the love you felt when you wrote this poem...this is beautiful
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thanks so much
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This makes me miss my boyfriend even more. Beautiful poem. loved this part:
I couldn't
be happier
but when
you're not
I hold back
tears.
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wow feel bad my poem made you miss your boyfriend even more i hope you can see him again soon and thanks for commenting
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