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A Little Piece

A little piece of my soul
Yeah, take that
A little piece of my psyche
Just help yourself
A little piece of my life
I'm not using it
A little piece of my innocence
Now I have none left
A little piece of heated flesh
Hell, why not?
A little piece of humility
But don't bring it back
A little piece of depravity
You have all of that
A little piece of my pain
To suit your purpose
A little piece of my sexuality
I don't need it anymore

~~or~~

A little piece of my heart
Like Janis said.

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Brazos, prompt #12--"piece", Angel w o Wings

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  • dillpickle62
    March 28, 2008
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    Wow....

    What a killer ending! This is great! Holy wow! Good luck with the contest my poetic pal.


  • ennovy silver member
    March 28, 2008

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    Well darling you sure said a lot here; with a little piece of love, and strife....one can share a whole life......Loved it...I adore you sweetheart....novy


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    Wonderfully done sweethart. Glad to see you up and writing..MWA! You know I love you Brazzie, keep that pen forever flowing.

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    Passions