She dances a thin line,
between frailty and vice
She's the perfect little concubine
but beauty has its price
Author notes
oh my, so, um, I can't rhyme, that would become painfully clear if I went any further.
A contest entry
- Wow Me! by Malkolis.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you can too rhyme my darling. I love it, sweet and short, but with a story that seems to go on forever. you have cemented yourself as one of my favorite authors. and that is something you should be proud of.
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I am proud, I'm feeling very pleased with myself. thank you. lol
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