(T)omorrow
Is
My
Everyday
(I)t's
Stolen
(M)any
Years
(E)ffusion
Never
Ending,
Missing
Yesterdays...
Author notes
Ok, maybe, just maybe, the third time's a charm....
I did waffles and ice cream, I did Butterfly, and now I submit Time. I know it's short, but as long as it adheres to the concept of what you were looking for, I will be pleased. As you know, this turned out to be quite difficult for me, but I did not want to quit. I wanted to do it right, lol.
My word Time
My phrase Time is my enemy
and the first letter of every each phrase spells out time too..
My god, ya'll, I think I might have done it!!!
In a list
A contest entry
- Acrostonym (Insane challange!) by drumdog79.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Daily Contest PIF (Acrostics) ((Ohno, Not Again!!!)) by JinSays.
300 points, ended April 16, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh i love th mesage down the side. it's true and i almost didn't see it. very creative good job!
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You and me both. I cannot believe how many levels you can take this form. I admit, I am intrigued, and hooked.
This particular form is amazing. What's amazing about it is I saw all the acrostic variations before your liner notes. WOW! THIS is an artistic accomplishment, to say the least.
I know nothing of this form, except I love it, can understand it, and am challenged by it. THIS piece is a prime example of why I hostess these contests, for the inspiration!
Whew!
Okay, enough with the praise, you're gonna get a big head
Thank you so much for this entry.
Best wishes to you!
Jin
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Indeed you got it! And got it wonderfuly I might add. I was actually hoping you didn't re-enter, but only because the first two poems were already so good I'm having a hard time judging this damn contest. Three is going to make it a blotch nodge. But I said you can re-enter and I meant it. Congrats on overcomming a difficulty, great poem, seriously.
As a note, it was kind of funny when I read the system message telling me "Time" was added to my contest. I was like, "Huh? Am I out of time already?" LMAO. -
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Thanks for the praise, thanks for the nice comment, thanks for putting up with me, and most of all thanks for making me challenge myself. Also, I find that you thought you were out of time hilarious. It became TIME because I was afraid the contest would end and I was running out of it lol...
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This is so cool! Great job with keeping at it, and finally succeeding!
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Congratulations, I think you've finally got it. Third time is a charm. Don't you feel better now that you didn't give up. Frustrating as it may have been. the feeling from knowing you got it right, is far better than the 150 bonus points I'm sending as promised. Good luck in the contest. Jennifer
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