Seduced by a world of dreams
hidden deep within her mind
is a whimsical of adolescent
adventures and adult passions
All the while, the body sleeps
the brain develops a barage of
exotic surroundings and strange
fantasies, of creative artistry
So innocent in silence, sleep
fair lady, while the planet keeps
turning and life passes you by,
take refuge in your peaceful lucidity
Author notes
Sarah Lee
Option 6: http://zemotion.deviantart.com/art/Luna-II-77362318
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A contest entry
- These Memories Locked in My Heart [pictures] by Blossom.
435 points, ended April 17, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I can definitely see your words when I look at the picture. Wonderfully done. I love the mixture of "adolescent adventures and adult passions".
The title you chose is amazing.
Also, I do believe you have a spelling error...second line in second stanza....
well thank you for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck. Much love.
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wow. stunning, great picture too. I loved this part:
So innocent in silence, sleep
fair lady, while the planet keeps
turning and life passes you by,
take refuge in your peaceful lucidity
Very well penned
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