Durable metal mule
pushed instead of pulled
singing each muscle bulge
with every wheel bump.
Author notes
Prompt: What has one wheel, no motor, but carries a load?
A contest entry
- PIF (Quickie)....... charades by In Too Deep1.
800 points, ended March 27, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So clever to have come up with this
Tis a most wonderful penning indeed
I really enjoyed your unique take
Congrats on the Gold,well deserved.
Tony
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Tonly
Thank you.
I did think this kind of quickie a really different and interesting ideal. Thanks so much for your kind comment. I appreciate it so much. ~Pamela 
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Excellent! congrats on this pam I like this a lot
so have you been watching in gardners? lol
it is snowing here today yuck!
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Jeff
Thank you. No gardeners yet... snow here this weekend as well, but nothing that stayed. LOL Thank you for your kind words. I thought this was such a cool ideas for a PIF contest. Thanks again. ~Pamela
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Congratulations on your win.clever words to go with the prompt.Wish I could write short ones like that, Ros
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Ros
Thank you. This was a fun new kind of quickie. I will be hosting a PIF similar soon due to winning this one. It was a lot of fun and I was shocked at the gold. I don't always do so well in these contests of quick brevity.
Thank you again. So pleased you enjoyed. ~Pamela
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never do you cease to amaze me... what a great write with such a vivid image! congratulations on the gold... i see it didn't delight only me!
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going nowhere
This was really a fun quickie but I never dreamed I would win. So I will be hosting one similar with at Charades/Riddle theme. Soon. Thank you so much. ~Pamela
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intriguing response to the prompt. Beautiful imagery. Thanks for entering, and best wishes in the game.
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Jason
Thank you so much for such kind words and the honor of gold. I am stunned. Thank you. Will PIF with a similar contest shortly. ~Pamela
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Very clever!!! You alluded to it wonderfully..... I remember loving it when my dad took me for wheelbarrow rides when I was a child..... Lovely entry and best of luck
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Classic! How immensely poetic you have made the humble wheelbarrow. This is truly detailed and vividly grasping.
Best wishes to you in this contest and game of charades... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Good work!
Wishing you luck in the contest.
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Yep
But it is still raining here. Hope to till soon though.
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Working in the garden, this sure feels familiar. Good write and good luck in this contest, my Friend.
Lady D
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Excellent Pam! LOL
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