I see her sitting there
With no one to care
I know how she feels
When her mind reels
And she cries
She’s so full of pain
Her tears falling like rain
And no one hears
As she screams surrounded by fears
And she cries
She cries and cries and cries
Her hand makes a fist
And she slits her wrist
And the blood flows
But soon the blood slows
And she cries
Oh yes she cries
And she hides her arm
Like the feelings that do harm
But sometimes it overcomes
No matter how far she runs
Till she cries
Oh baby doll yes she cries
She has so many scars
The numbers rival the stars
As her head whirls
Her tears fall like pearls
She cries
And cries and cries and she dies
A little bit more inside
And she cries out
As she falls down and shouts
Please oh please
I’m on my hands and knees
And she cries
And for her death would be a prize
She lies there in tears
Still surrounded by fears
Wondering why
While she lies there and cries
And cries and cries tills she dies
A little bit more on the inside
And she’s afraid of dark
Her arms covered with marks
And she’s afraid to be alone
Afraid of the unknown
So she cries
She cries and cries and cries
What would you advise?
She wishes she were strong
But everything is wrong
Nothing is right
She cannot win this fight
So she cries
With her red and swollen eyes
She no longer has hope
She doesn’t no how to cope
So she slices her skin
Either way she can’t win
And she cries
Its not like she can rise
And she was forgotten by her friend
And now it is the end
Because who can live alone?
But next to her rings the phone
As she cries
But stops and puts on her disguise
And she picks the phone
Her voice hard as a stone
She asks who is there
As if she really cares
And she wants to cry
She wants to die
And the voice catches her by surprise
Though ready to day her good byes
Her friend returned
Actually concerned
And she begins to cry
And I watch and wish I were her
because no one here will be my cure
And no one returns as I sit here and I cry
A contest entry
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Comments
1 - 10 of 10
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kinda cliche but good all the same
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a great peice of writting, but it sounds more like song lyrics to me than a poem. but keep writting
xoxoxo
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if i read much more of that i would top myself, whats all the crying about? as you don't really say just that shes in pain. don't get me wrong it not a bad write i just want to know what it's about.
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thanks for entering....I LOVE this poem!! LONG and DARK thank you, thank you! I've been craving to read something like this! and the rhyme and flow! AMAZING!! please! continue writting poems like these! you did a really, really nice job here! good luck in this and all of your other contests
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wow, i really enjoyed reading this. i can relate to this and i loved the rhythm. the last stanza really blew me away, it's like a little hope, some light at the end of the tunnel. thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest.
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wow!
Powerful.... I have no other word... such powerful write... love the way you made it intriguing in the stanzas were you wrote:
And cries and cries tills she dies
A little bit more on the inside
the way you made it think like she already commited suicide and she was only dying internally...
the ending was the most amaizng ending I've ever read... the way you played that all the time the pain was yours not hers, but yours, ohh those last lines wretched my heart to shreds....
And I watch and wish I were her
because no one here will be my cure
And no one returns as I sit here and I cry
wonderful just wonderful... thanks for entering!
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this poem wasbeautifull and veary well written a gret job nda work of art i am happy you enterd my contest with in but clearly in the rules i wrote it ses no ore than 40 lines pleseread them think you for joining my contest your poe was suepuve indeed i loved it but ya thnxagean -bow's-
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This looks alot like something I would write, if I were still allowed to write cutter poems. Great work!
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omg i am in love with this poem
dude that is a fucking bomb ass poem i look forward to reading more of your work. i relate to a lot of the lines you have in your poem. for a 16 year old ive done a good amount in a year. drugs. cutting. suicide attempts. drinking. i have learned its not good but i cant give it up just yet. just how i was with cutting. in time the pain will subside. but it may always be there but each day it gets easier.
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wow thats really good i like its
its like really dark and emotional to but i love this one its like wow
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