Hey, baby
I came to see you
Just wanted to tell you...
BABY! What are you doing?
Oh my God..put down the gun!
Sweetie, I'm begging you
Just calm down
Shh..don't cry. It's just me.
Honey, it's me!! Don't be afraid!
Baby, listen to me
You need to drop the gun
No..no...NOO!!
Wait! Wait. Let's just talk about this
I..I..can't breathe
You don't have to do this
Everything will be okay...
That's a shame
This flower used to be pure white
Perhaps I'll just keep it for myself
Author notes
The picture really brought out a lot of sorrow and realization in me...iamthebeatles 'blood in bloom' was the inspiring prompt picture
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired (Blood in Bloom) by iamthebeatles.
1500 points, ended April 15, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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This is so sad and though well written it is terribly tragic. I like the style this was written in, usually I like things with more visuals but this worked well without it, in fact to much things to see would overpower it's ambiance. Love the last lines by the way.
*peace*
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