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What was Mine is Yours

My heart
Ever bleeding
Ever beating for you
My heart
That's no longer mine

My soul
Once so alive
Now dark and still
My soul
It died for you

My mind
Always free
Bound in confusion
My mind
Lost at the thought of you

My love
Easily given
Quickly rejected
My love
It still cries for you

My hand
Cold and frail
Empty and bare
My hand
Longs for the warmth of yours

A contest entry

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  • he broke me
    March 28, 2008

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    thanx for the entry and good luck in my contest.

    "My hand
    Cold and frail
    Empty and bare
    My hand
    Longs for the warmth of yours "
    i loved this bit of the poem

    xxx be broke me


  • never in his arms
    March 27, 2008
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    so me!!! i love it! perfectly describes my thoughts well done


  • LeaPan
    March 27, 2008
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    Emo.

    [: but still good.
    "My love
    Easily given
    Quickly rejected"

    fav.