My heart
Ever bleeding
Ever beating for you
My heart
That's no longer mine
My soul
Once so alive
Now dark and still
My soul
It died for you
My mind
Always free
Bound in confusion
My mind
Lost at the thought of you
My love
Easily given
Quickly rejected
My love
It still cries for you
My hand
Cold and frail
Empty and bare
My hand
Longs for the warmth of yours
A contest entry
- *Tempt me with kisses* by he broke me.
525 points, ended April 22, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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thanx for the entry and good luck in my contest.
"My hand
Cold and frail
Empty and bare
My hand
Longs for the warmth of yours "
i loved this bit of the poem
xxx be broke me -
so me!!! i love it! perfectly describes my thoughts well done


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Emo.
[: but still good.
"My love
Easily given
Quickly rejected"
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