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unforgiveable

Scared
Who could believe
That?
From a friend...

Betrayed
A crooked smile
Adored...
Now a fear

The air leaks out of my world
Taking color...
And friends?
With it

"Whispers"
They know...
'Well good for him'
Friends?

One sentence
Each
The words linger
Left on my skin...

A foggy insecurity
Distances me
Sinking inside my own
...Shame

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  • Flight of Dragons
    March 28, 2008

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    Hmmm. . . .

    This poem is really thought provoking, I didn't really fallow it but hey I'm not good at that anyway. So keep up the good work


  • Fallnangel7
    March 27, 2008
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    can you please chang the title


    • flaed
      March 27, 2008
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      yah sure babe. whacha want me to call it? i honestly couldn't think of a name


    • Stormy Sky
      March 27, 2008
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      it's none of your business what she calls the poem. it's hers, not yours.

      • flaed
        March 27, 2008
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        no. it is his business.
        he's doing me a favor not killing people.


        • Stormy Sky
          March 28, 2008
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          thats the biggest load of bs that i've heard since i was dating chris. Killing people and poetry are two separate things.


          • flaed
            April 3, 2008
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            um... no. this topic...is...touchy.
            storm you have no idea what you are talking about.
            if youd quit hatting both of us, and everyone, long enough to open your eyes, you would see, that sometimes there are sircumstances that are no bodys fault. not everyone is as evil as you would like to believe.
            you push everyone away to make yourself safe, so you can be vulnerable.

            this poem has to do with a guy who did something unforgivable to me, recently.
            i didn't want mike to get suspended, so i saked him not to get in a fight with him.
            all i asked you waas to step back a bit and not be so hrsh on him, this situation is hard enough as it is.

            and if you never wanna see me again, could you not say it to my face?
            i do not accept it untill you can say it t m,y face.


          • Fallnangel7
            March 28, 2008
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            you never mattered to begin with, you need to lean to stay out of our lives, you want me out of yours than be me a favor and stay out of me and megs!!!!!!

          • Fallnangel7
            March 28, 2008
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            go to hell stormy, stay out of me and megans buisness, you dont matter anymore

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