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[ You're a five dressed up like a nine ]

You're a five dressed up like a nine
Dressed to kill,a fucking razor blade
I lied and said that everything's fine

I'm denied my fate 'cus I'm too afraid
You alone stabbed the knife in my back
You are the reason I feel so betrayed

Feel like I've fallen between the cracks
You left me here, you had no regrets
My passionate side is about to attack

Cause you pain that you won't forget
Who fuckin' told you that life was fair
I'm done with this, your sun has set

You drove my mind crazy beyond repair
How the fuck can anyone live like that?
I'll try to avoid your backwards glare

Emotion is the reason I'm where I'm at
Greed and anger with a lust to succeed
I'm fully loaded and ready for combat

Watching my lonely black soul bleed
The man in black and I walk that line
Bound by the hate, by the burning need.


























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  • CountryCousin
    March 27, 2008

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    Excellent piece.

    Oh this is a very good contest isn't it? This is an excellent piece to read and I do wish you the best in the contest. I think you pretty much nailed it.