How can it be,
You say,
That your book is worth more than my life?
Why is it,
You say,
That I have left you for something better?
What is it,
You say,
That has made me cold to you?
The secrets,
the lies,
The deception...
It will never change.
I am leaving now
While I still can.
To be where I belong.
Can't you see,
You will be,
Anything but shallow?
We were never friends,
So there will be no end,
And only a new begininng for me.
Author notes
Now Sarah, don't you see that you are never going to change? That is who you are and stop acting bigger than you are!
A contest entry
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How does this make you feel? What does it mean to you?
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this is a great write. good luck in the comp.
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There is mystery there as to why friends/boyfriends whoever, decide to make the choices they do. Sometimes regardless of warning s hand friendly advice they'll go do it anyway. It's hard to watch someone self destruct and do things you never thought they would. I think in those circumstances all you can do is let them know that you'll be there for them because that is what being a true friend is all about. Though I think in some situations ending the friendship is best if it has a detrimental affect on you.
HUGS, thank you for entering my contest.
Dari xxx
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=] this is good.
great write
good luck -
A really lovely and expressive write!
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My ex was full of all these and it's how I never really can trust him and even if he wants me to be with him now, which I doubt he does, I couldn't as he's hurt me far too much to come back.
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I LOVE THIS POEM ABOUT SARA!! lol
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I haven't been on this site in a while sorry for the hold up, i really need to get writing some poetry.. lol Emma Hoad-Owen yu have to give me Kristen's screen name for this so i can add her iightt. thankss -
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never mind
never mind emma i found her on it lol see yaa
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I thought it was really good. Well emma all of your poems are pretty good. Love yea,
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A very expressive piece of poetry with a message to be heard! Sad that it is, that some do not make priorities in their lives and can grasp the concept of what is truly important!
Well done indeed!
Jasminerose
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Thank-you for the lovely comment! Hope you are having a wonderful day!
Emma ^_^
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The expression of ones emotions in poetic form is a most profound form of communication, and you have done quite well with this dear.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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aww... so im going to assume thats this has to do with potentially a guy?... well whatever it is you can express yourself freely and its sounds really good! -Gore
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