Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

explain

My eyes are open
But I have been sleeping
I have seen what has happend
But I was still blind

If you could explain
To me what you see
I might one day obtain
Open mind and open eyes

If I could explain
The agonizing pain
Of being asleep while I am awake
You might understand the need to take
A different path and leave a different wake

If we could explain
To each other the love that remains
We might find
Peace of mind.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Trew
    October 6, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful
    favorite verse
    If we could explain
    to each other the love that remains
    we might find
    peace of mind


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    ooh

    this was a painful write.. the hurt was so deep! but, it was written in a very beautiful way... your words were so fresh! keep penning kays!

    smile always!