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The Good Bad Boy

He's a charmer, He's a snake.
He makes you cry, He makes you laugh.
He drives you wild, He drives you mad.
Through passion, Through life.
He's still there reaching for you.
To hold you in his arms,
TO keep you close to his heart.
Even when he's out playing,
Even when he's a real bad boy.
He's still your big teddy bear.
Even though he's a flirt.
Yes, he's a ladies man.
He may appear to play the part.
But he's still there at your side.
He's beautiful, He's sexy.
He's faithful, he's perfect.
He's everything you want,
He's gods gift to women.

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  • scream.n2.nite
    March 27, 2008

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    Ha ha ha! Thanks, this was pretty good! Thank you for entering my contest and the piece was clear and bouncy! Good work, and good luck in the contest!

    - - riah - -


  • Tarja
    March 27, 2008

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    I have for sure known my share of these! I love what you have done here, love. You expressed yourself very well. A great description of every parent's nightmare! I have a feeling this was inspired by more than just the contest. Well either way, it was excellent! Great job! And good luck.


  • EmmaLuLu
    March 27, 2008
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    hihihi, yes this describes everyones dream man. x the best so far. check mine out x