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Nature's Force

The truest of beauty.
Brilliant orb of light,
so radiant, up-lifting.

Empowering through vision,
absorbing the warmth.
Endorphins running wild.

Nature's relief for mankind.

 

(C) Nichole A. Dustin

        3/27/2008

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I was just sitting around and noticed the brilliant light beams shining through my window. That second sparked a poem in my heart. I hope you enjoy it.

My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*

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  • Spiritual Nature
    July 17, 2008

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    So true...I think LIGHT plays such a huge role in all we do and it is truly "nature relief for mankind".  Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!Smile

    BLESSINGS, Doris


  • Mirrors shard
    May 21, 2008
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    lovely word choice..this is a truly beautiful poem!


  • NeonRose
    April 28, 2008
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    A very lovely spark it was. Beautifully done, poet.


  • Prison of Lyme
    March 31, 2008
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    sweet


  • AsIThink gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is some nice imagery here. I enjoyed this. I'm a nature fan. Things like this spark all sorts of ideas for me too. This light piece was full of energy. Thanks for posting this...true beauty (in this rainbow image too). Brilliant attention to your beams of light, huh?


  • CountryCousin
    March 28, 2008

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    So true.

    I will say again that this is a good place to come to and hang out while reading some really good poetry. Some take the criticizing too far. Yes there are ways of saying something that can be improved upon but I am a person that believes in diplomacy. By the way I loved the poem.


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    That says a lot; "Nature's relief for mankind."

    How truly healing nature is when we open ourselves to that. Very lovely poem. Your words give hope and paint a lovely picture. The endorphins are great! Thanks for sharing with us.

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