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Blood Red Rose


Blood red rose
Leave me be
I don’t want you anymore
The one who gifted you
Is gone forever

Blood red rose
Crimson stained love
Never coming back
Like that rose
Blood red rose

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Inspired by the pic Blood in Bloom by iamthebeetles

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  • iamthebeatles
    April 15, 2008

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    I really like the direction you took in this poem. The last stanza stood out to me, I love the images you fill with theses last few lines;

    Blood red rose
    Crimson stained love
    Never coming back
    Like that rose
    Blood red rose

    *peace*