longing for you
like an ache in my soul
thinking of your eyes
the sound of your voice
the graze of your fingers along my body
the touch of your breath across my neck
the press of your lips down my back
craving the taste of you in my mouth
your broad chest against my back
your strong arms wrapped around me
the smell of you on my pillow
making love to you
becoming one with you
my skin tingling
with the touch of you
aching in my heart to feel you
being with you like a dream
wanting that beautiful moment
waiting impatiently
knowing you are so far from me
holding love in my heart
to bring me closer to you
Author notes
contest sensual
A contest entry
- Senual Writers Welcome.. Pic Inspired.. come see by kiwigirljacks.
950 points, ended April 10, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Such a feeling of longing and desire in this! I found it beautiful and sensual all at the same time.
Thank you for this lovely entry!!
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This actually reminded me of two of my characters... I'm sure you know who... but anyway as always, you have penned something of great emotion and depth... there was a lot of personality here too and I think that you have done a fabulous job bringing the prompt to a new level. Well done indeed and good luck.
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