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Fortuity

She is but a silhouette
that once was real

when a crisp autumn day
took her very breath away

The texture of the winds
a realm which transcends

there along the side of the road
lay the book she clasp as it took hold

a ring of tears inside
from her pale face that cried

Now the pages fan in the breeze
and curl the edges from drip off the trees

she had only wanted to forget
when she paused to pick a violet

Author notes

Word Bank: pale, crisp, texture, violet, ring, book, fan, clasp, drip and silhouette

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  • Dalaney gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    very nice. I love "Now the pages fan in the breeze" Such a peaceful image you have drawn here. Thank you for entering my contest. Love, Lane

  • carole21
    March 29, 2008

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    nice

    nice write for the prompt . . liked "She is but a silhouette" and "she had only wanted to forget" . .