I知 fine on my own
Can稚 you see?
So why
Why do you keep saying
I知 going to be lonely?
I知 not lonely
Nor am I mad
Believe me
You know when I知 that sad
So leave me alone
Just let me be
Who I want to be
And that is
Guy free
Author notes
Option:
3) Everyone expects you to get with a guy and you just wanna be on your own right now.
A contest entry
- TEENAGE GIRLS!!! PAY ATTENTION!!!! by Procrastination.
450 points, ended April 3, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow! The rhyme in this is so natural, it doesn't sound forced at all, which is very impressive because often it does.
Welldone and goodluck!
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i got a little laugh at the end. usually all the girls i know always want to be around guys, but i guess you're different....sry....i'm supposed to be commenting the poem...i like it...mainly because its short.
it's truly amazing and really does leave an impact on me.
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this is an amazing write and i love the depth and the truth in your words
I am always here for you baby gurl
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Awww thanks a lot!!!!
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