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my mortality

I breathe and remember things you said,
that were so wrong.
I lay still and remember the old times,
you were gone so long.
How much do I remember?
The pain, long and torturous,
the longing, poisonous and deadly.

Oh yea,

I remember.

 

I remember being three,

looking up to you,

I remember being scared,

wishing you were there.

How much do I still remember?

The abuse, the bruises, the tears, the shame,

I still remember.

 

My heads clogged,

my emotions drained,

fighting a battle,

thats leaves me bruised and stained.

There once was a time,

so long long ago,

that I loved you true,

not just for show.

Bitter mortality slowed down that rate,

ending this poem with,

this was our fate. 

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