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Her Beloved

 

 

 

 

Pale light shown through the dusty window

spreading its diffused glow upon an old book

resting on a table, pages crisp,

 

yellowed, bound in leather with cracked texture,

a result of years of exposure to

sun that gave no regard.

 

Silence became this scene, save an occasional

swish of the overhead fan, or drip of rain

on weathered windowsill.

 

Within the covers of this, Bible, was a single

violet, a memento, pressed and withered,

placed by a widow who clung

 

to a memory of someone dear, and atop the Bible,

was a ring, a wedding band which

she would daily clasp,

 

staring into emptiness, remembering as soft light

cast her somber silhouette

across a lonely floor.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Word challenge: Pale, Book, crisp, fan, violet, drip
texture, clasp, ring, silhouette.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    March 29, 2008
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    a lovely story...Thank you so very much
    for penning this beautiful poem. Love, Lane


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 27, 2008
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    Beautiful


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    The rain is dripping on the windowsill as I read and it makes your words even more poignant and full of very sincere emotions. The sadness of being the one left behind but the gentle touch of memories that will always linger and comfort is evident throughout the poem.

    I think this is one of the more tender and beautiful pieces you have written lately; the subtlety of the feelings expressed is a tangible thing, if that makes sense.

    My best wishes to you in the contest.




  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    oh wow daddy your words that you had to use speak alot and the depth inwhich they talk says so much aswell. i love ths well done

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