there were days of deliberation
we spoke of our worlds liberation
we dreamed of saving them
but day gave way to day
and summer to fall
my love became yours
and our covenant crushed
my brother now strikes
my brother now damns
my brother my brother
my death shall be at your hands
and yours at mine
Author notes
"Best friends means you pull the trigger"
i should be doing my work
A contest entry
- PIF - quote prompt. by Luckintheshadows.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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WOW, this is wonderful, your words flow together so well! thanks for entering and sharing your poem,
Luck.
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