A ring circled the moon
pale in the crisp mountain air
where silhouette cast violet
became fantasy's clasp of faith.
Illuminated ferns breezed a fan of texture
as morning drip whispered its dew song.
My book,
resting gently upon my chest
billowed soft fairy dust in heavy breath
and woke my dreams within its tune.
Author notes
Word Bank:
Pale Book crisp fan violet drip texture clasp ring silhouette
A contest entry
- For The Simple Minded by Dalaney.
900 points, ended March 29, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a good poem, this made me think of someone sitting on a porch, who fell asleep and then woke up still sat there as dawn arrived
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Oh my...
This is a stunning penning indeed.
I love the imagery and wording
Your poem has such a peaceful feel.
I really enjoyed this write.
Best of wishes to you
Tony
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As always, your writes are wonderful to read and sink into. I thank you for submitting this poem. Love, Lane
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Very creative and nice written poetry. I like its theme very much.
~Sonja~
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Such a peaceful lovely write. Good luck in this contest, my Friend.
Lady D
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I never would have guessed that this was inspired from a word bank! Such magic you have spun into a beautiful little poem and I am LOVING your ending!!
"My book,
resting gently upon my chest
billowed soft fairy dust in heavy breath
and woke my dreams within its tune."
THIS is poetry, my friend~
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Nice work! You spelled out a beautiful way with poetry. Thanks for sharing!
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Brilliant
A very clever use of the word bank that nothing sounds forced - which means that you are a wordsmith worth millions. My favourite lines:
Illuminated ferns breezed a fan of texture
as morning drip whispered its dew song
Oh dear, how I wish I could write like this...May be in in the next life! lol
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Lovely and ethereal dear, a very clever endeavor, indeed. All the best.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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