this strand of hair
is as thin, I think
as your desire to see me
and yet, how many times
I can wrap it around my finger
A contest entry
- Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow... I love this poem, especially the two lines at the end. So much meaning in so few lines... good job winning silver!
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I think that you have many meanings in this very short but thought provoking write.
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You have to think more than twice over this deceptive little piece. It stings in the end and is the better for it.
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Wow, I love it.
Very nice piece :]
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a very well written piece.. i like such abstract thoughts.. good imagery there..thanx for sharing..
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