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The non-wind sways

Pale Violet shimmers the silhouette
She crisply waves her fan for attention
A heavy texture teases the air but only very briefly

Pages of the Book sway in the non-wind
I clasp the Book quickly shut
A small blood drip from under my heavy silver ring

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  • Frozentearz
    March 31, 2008

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    I love how you took the words and wove them into your Lady D way Best of luck to you in her contest,
    Blessings,
    Frozentearz


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    thank you so very much for entering this beautiful and simple poem...You did well with the words provided Love, Lane


  • Neha Kaushik
    March 27, 2008

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    very beautiful write.. the imagery is awesome with good flow and rhythm.. good luck.. loved reading it.. thanx for sharing..