I ran towards
your light
hoping for joy
to find it's way
back to my mind
I cannot grin
not after you turn away
from my submission
to find a virgin
I was your paramour
now I am your ghost
haunting you.
that blight
you cannot purge
your body of
Author notes
I am reading the Boleyn Inheritance by the author of The other Boleyn Girl. and I think I have it stuck on my mind
A contest entry
- No E's Please! by aaaaaaaa.
460 points, ended April 2, 2008, 13 entries
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I'm back for the final judging and rereading each poem more carefully and saw that you had: 'after' and 'purge', so sorry can't give you a medal
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haha. I can't believe I over looked two. I read this so many times. lol. I gave myself the biggest "V8" head smack ever. well, I still had so much fun doing this contest, I hope you do more.
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This is good, it flows very naturally considering there's no e's. great job.
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Oooh, that sounds good. I want to read it.. Did you see the movie yet? Did you like it?
(loved the structure..)
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I have not seen the movie yet, but the first book was amazing, and the second, the one I'm reading now I hate haaving to put down
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