Floating free, my senses engulF
Open seas... flowing shades of indigO
Radiant sunrise warms the aiR
Endlessly serene, free of woE
Vessel of love where passion's reV
Entices feelings inside of mE
Reclusive dreams... hold me here foreveR.
Author notes
my first attempt, I hope it fits ok.
A contest entry
- Mirror Acrostics by LanguishedLad.
950 points, ended April 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a good poem, i prefer not advertising them when i post acrostics, i have some posted, but i won't say where lol
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o0o0o a stash of secret acrostics.. must be good ones
hehe
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Lovely feeling of serenity and peace in this... just a lovely feeling it gives off. Well done!
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Thank you, I appreciate your kindness.
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Its beautiful.. the mirror acrostic as well your poem.. the imagery is awesome.. thanx for sharing.. good luck ..
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Thank you so much. It was alot of fun doing this prompt. I appreciate your comment.
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Excellent Done
Wow. I think that this is added to one of my favorites yours. Beautiully written and I like the way you manage to get the the last letter of each verse to spell FOREVER. Good Luck in the contest Girl. Luv Ya, Michele
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My thanks ma'am on your always nice comments. I admit this mirrored acrostic was a challenge, it almost hurt lol I appreciate your kindness
love ya back
Linda
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