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Pain

When I met you I was happy all day,
when I saw you,I saw your face.
I got to know you, you bacame a friend,
I always hoped it would never end.

Through the times we had fun together,
never did I once care about the weather.
You kissed and hugged me like you actually cared,
But in the end I was left in despaire.

I feel pain it hit me hard,
it went straight through my heart like a glass shard.
I pulled out my heart and gave it to you,
but you went and broke it and said we were through.

You ever feel this way about the person you once loved.

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  • not-loved-enough
    May 20, 2008
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    aww thats sad. is it about vans?
    i liked it.


  • XXpurple92vampXX
    April 18, 2008

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    i have felt like that and its not cool personally i tired to forgot him and i did but at the time it hurt alot and i wish it never happen but it did well it is a good poem i do like it it reminds me of my ex manny


  • EmmaLuLu
    March 27, 2008

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    Thought this poem was very nicly written.
    It explains very weel how you feel and how a person you loved and cared about has just left you with no notice...very well written, says alot. check out mine x