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The Pastor (Part 2) EXTREME ADULT CONTENT

**PLEASE NOTE**
**IF EASILY OFFENDED DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER**
**EXTREME ADULT CONTENT THAT WILL BE DISTURBING**
**YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED**



I stand there admiring my artistry contemplating eating this angel’s heart
Flashes of hell visit me, licking my senses into a satanic frenzy.

The angel’s carcass desecrated by the trusting hands of a holy man
Hot vapors now slowly rise from the angel’s skinless skull.
I smell her heavenly nectar ‘could this be the soul seeking heaven’
Slowly I start to breathe her vapors in, deeper, deeper into my lungs.

I envisage the doors of heaven opening before my very eyes`
Slicing through waiting angels, who are queuing for salvation?

Hallucinations make me quiver, when I stare at her skinned flesh
Electric pulsates through my veins, as I slowly lick the weeping blood.
Another taste of her sweet warm flesh quickens my pulse.
Virgins blood dripping wastefully onto the floor of the church,
Entrails hanging from her gapping chest, I must remove more skin’
Now slicing down through her flesh, her intestines tumble to the floor.

The hot steam from her innards slowly rises up to my waiting nostrils
How I wish I had more time to play with sweet Charlotte's insides
Even now in these moments of madness, I twitched with delight
Neatly I start cutting away layers of sweet flesh from her body.

The pleasure now rushes through me as I lick the blade clean
Hell is now calling for me to carry out my first demonic ritual
Evilness fills my thoughts sending me more visions of pleasure.

Fallen, I’ve merely started on the quest of my darkest desires,
I now take the syringe from the draw and plunge it into her spine,  
Relieving the angel of her heavenly fluids, her pureness now captured.
Eagerly I drained every drop of sweetness from her carcass
Slowly emptying the syringes contents into the capsule labeled C.

Only now does it become clear what the darkness wants from me
Flooding me with more visions, ha-ha-ha, ha-ha-ha, how sweet it was.

How deliciously delightful these visions where becoming
Enticing me onwards, pushing me ever nearer to the gates of hell.
Laughing at my sinfulness, I glance back at Charlotte’s stiffening body
Looking more beautiful in death, than she did in life itself

Wonderful, how wonderful this artwork of mine was looking,
I must now take the angels heart, the final part of my demonic ritual.
Lowering myself back down, I stare through the gas mask once more
Looking deeper into the angels soulless blue eyes

Glistening back at me, but I know she has now left this domain,
Reaching for the blade, I begin to cut the angels heart from her torso
Eagerly cutting the tubes from her chest, blood gushing all over me
Eating the angels sweet warm meat, piece by piece, piece by piece
Tasting my evilness with every mouthful of the sweet angels flesh

More, more, I must devour it all, destroy gods sweetest angel
Each mouthful tasting more succulent and delicious than the last

Wiping my lips clean, I wished for more but I had devoured it all
I could hear the demons calling to me, applauding my artistry.
This, my finest moment, my first payback to this corrupted church
How I trembled with excitement, tonguing the flesh between my teeth

Once again, I looked at Charlotte, thanking her for her participation,
Pleasure eating you, I thought to myself, ha-ha-ha, ha-ha-ha,
Evil had delivered onto me, an appetite that god could never comprehend
Now knowing, that this was just the first deed of my own deliverance,
Everything my visions had showed me now made perfect sense.
Doing the devils deeds, I must now burn the church to its foundations.

Deliver the clouds of darkness for all to see, and for all to taste,
Only then, can I truly accomplish the first work of the devil himself.
Onwards I shall march to the next sweet angel, who puts her faith in god,
Reaping the rewards of damnation, for the slaughter is just beginning,
Simply serving the demons demands with my ever-maddening mind.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

2.) A poem/Song about the darker things in life. I'll allow depression,suicide,murder. Any of those things.

**PLEASE NOTE** **IF EASILY OFFENDED DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER** **EXTREME ADULT CONTENT THAT WILL BE DISTURBING** **YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED**

 

If you happened to miss part 1 of The Pastor:http://allpoetry.com/poem/3772812

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  • Silver Asylum
    October 22, 2008
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    oooooooo

    This was crazy. It definitely sent chills up my spine. Great write and good luck!


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    October 14, 2008

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    Superb follow up to part one. Love the acrostic as well...Best of luck to you in the contest.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • ageofdarkpoets
    October 9, 2008

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    I love your work (although you already know that ). I especially like how you write these particular works. The only thing I would suggest is to check your spelling in the arcrostics. Other then that - EXCELLENT WORK!!!!!!


  • Edna Sweetlove
    September 13, 2008

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    This is quite amusing. I smiled a couple of times. Charlotte strikes me as a bit of a slut so I could feel a sense of sisterhood with her, dirty cow that she is.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    August 24, 2008

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    Wow this is amazing time i mean wow very descriptive and evil i love it so so much, its just WOWW thanks for entering, all my love
    kitty xx


  • Night Terrors
    August 2, 2008
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    damn dude! this should be a horrr movie I loved it thanks for entering


  • peregrin
    July 31, 2008

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    Great work!!!! Very dark, perfect for my contest! Nice, and I am feeling it!
    Good luck in my contest!


  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 24, 2008

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    Somehow

    Part two is even better then part one. Absolutley appetizing. =] Deliciously Gorgasmic to say the least. Wonderful job.


  • JustFallingApart
    July 9, 2008

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    wow, you are very talented, i loved this almost as much as the first, sorry, i had to read part two it was that good, havnt looked at your name though in all fareness so dont worry


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    came back to feast again!

    (just bought new icecream)
    you sure know how to pull our worst fears out...
    goosebumps from within that do not appear outwardly!
    just plain ole great writing!
    ears/Seattle had to take another peek!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    i swear i am never going to lose this

    wniter weight if he keeps writing like this piercing
    our flesh and soul's....i run for the frig every time
    to soothe myself with icecream!
    You are so bold and vivid!
    You scare me a whole lot more then stephen king does!
    absolute brillance is this blood feasting poem!
    ears/Seattle okay who took the rockyroad!


    • Timespell
      April 17, 2008
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      LOL... Thanks I hope the ice cream was nice. Not sure about Stephen King, he is nothing short of brilliant! So I think I have a long road to travel before I can get even close to his work!

      Thanks again for reading and commenting.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • Fey Absinthe
    April 9, 2008
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    Thank you for the grizzly poem! ^-^


    • Timespell
      April 12, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting on the 2 part of this story.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 7, 2008

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    Congrats on the gold!

    Wow can't believe I missed this...been waiting for it A divine write, love the darkness and graphic imagery...just the fix I needed. Pleased to hear you are going to be writing more, can't wait Superbly done, congrats on a much deserved gold!


    • Timespell
      April 7, 2008
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      Thanks, Yes I intend to do a few more on this character, I suppose now that I've created a monster of the cloth, I will have to finish it...LOL I do know where this story is going and how many more parts will have to be written.

      Thanks again.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • Aeonna
    April 7, 2008

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    WoW

    OOOH. I LUV THIS SECOND PART TO ANOTHER POEM!

    FABULOUS, DARK PIECE AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR ENTERING..

     

    SISTER GRIMM


    • Timespell
      April 7, 2008
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      Thanks so much for awarding my entry with the Gold Trophy!
      Glad you liked my follow up story on this crazy character.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • Dak
    March 27, 2008

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    Oooh, the awaited part two has not been a disappointment. I love the character's madness in the laughs, and word choice is as amazing as ever. I await more, like always.


    • Timespell
      March 28, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting on my second part of this story, I do appreciate it.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • yourguardianangel
    March 27, 2008
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    Wow! Omfg..this is absolutely brilliant!!..oh..excuse me while I go vomit..


    • Timespell
      March 27, 2008
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      LMAO... Well I suppose it done its job on you to that effect!
      Will have a break myself from this character for awhile.

      Thanks for reading.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    March 27, 2008

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    AWWWWWWW!!!!!!

    this is FUCKIN HOT AS HELL!!!!!!!!
    Holy shit, you are sooooooo good at this stuff.
    Omg, WHEN ARE YOU WRITING THE NEXT PIECE?? LMAO
    You should continue on with this and do another murder, LOL
    This is AMAZING. WOW, this is awesome....
    kudos you *applauses


    • Timespell
      March 27, 2008
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      LOL... Yes I am going to do a few on this character, when time permits me. Just needed to get this one out of my system first,hahaha.

      Thanks for reading this one, glad you liked again!!

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


      • Synthetic-Nightmare
        March 28, 2008
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        *evil grin*

        i've got an idea for the next murder one you write.
        Why don't you take my life in that one as well?? (i know you've already done that for me in another one, lol. BUt it could be fun!)

        o.O

        interested?


        • Timespell
          March 28, 2008
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          LOL... I will deeply think of you Darci, when contemplating slicing up a nice young lady:

          It's just getting the time to write the story's!

          All the best,

          ~T.S~


  • completely mad
    March 27, 2008
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    yay I am so happy you wrote a second part....great job once again, and good luck


    • Timespell
      March 27, 2008
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      Thanks... Yeah I am glad to of got this second part done and out of the way so to speak. Hopefully there will more on the pastor in the near future...LOL

      Thanks again for reading and commenting.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

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