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Heaven sent

 

Cradled in roses the baby lies in a bed

while soft lullabies gently fill his head

Velvet pedals give him comfort today

without thorns and the lightest sway

 

"Shhhh" little one in those dreams so deep

as the Angels watch over you ...fast asleep

 

More beautiful than flowers fresh and new

our wonderful Lord will help see you thru

Complete silence is throughout the air

as this little baby sleeps without a care~

 

 

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  • Soulful Woman silver member
    March 30, 2008

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    Beautiful. Hadnt read this until I was judging. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
    Soulful Woman


  • Killerzombies
    March 29, 2008

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    This is an absolutley beautiful poem. Very heart felt, and a very literal poem when it comes to the picture, the imagery comes out wonderful. It's asweet poem and I enjoeyed reading it.


  • earthstar
    March 27, 2008

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    Wow it stunning, soft and gentle full of love. It captures the picture. God does really see us though from a baby and till we go home to see him. I love it. It very sweet and endearing with a simple truth put in to such fine words


  • -LilacThOughts-
    March 27, 2008

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    Exquisite!

    This is so beautifully penned, soft and gentle, engaging, endearing and breathtaking, your words are like like a lullaby and need music...an absolute gorgeous picture

    Much love ~Lilac


  • Elfin
    March 27, 2008

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    Awwwww Gary this is so sweet and lovely, and what a beautiful picture to inspire you, it looks like one of Anne Geddes's. Well done and good luck in the contest. Val


  • inspiredCreativity
    March 27, 2008

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    if i had applauses to give, here is where i would give them. excellent, absolutely beautiful. Thank You


  • XxTwigxX
    March 27, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful piece. Its soft and sweet, I lovethe words you chose to protray your message of this image. Very awsome write.

    XxTwigxX


  • luckynsincere
    March 27, 2008
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    is this anne geddes pic? Oh my this is so beautiful. Your wording is soft as the blanket of petals themselves!!! GREAT WORK!!

    I am stealing this pic too

    lol.

    So glad I clicked here. I needed a smile

    Be well my friend. Long time no hear from

    Mel

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