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Never Fall In Love

Because I can't...
Because I won't...
Because it hurts...
Because I can't tell...
Because I've never felt this...
Because I've cried...
Because in the end I tried...
Because I know...
Because it ends...
Because no one see's it through the end...
Because she'll leave...
Because I'm scared...
Because no one cares...
Because I'm alone...
Because I know what will happen...
Because I don't want anymore scars...
Because I'm running...
Because I'm screaming...
Because life keeps going on...
Because time never stops...
Because I'm me...
Because I want you...
Because I scare myself...
Because I laugh when no one is around...
Because you'll think I'm strange...
Because I know I am...
Because I am me...
Because I don't pretend...
Because I don't want to...
Ever fall in love...
Again.

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  • xXgabbybearXx
    March 27, 2008
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    woah i liked it got a little anoying but i loved it be safe ok?
    ~gabby~


  • aeolia
    March 27, 2008
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    It might be more effective if you didn't resort to repeating the same phrase and structure so much. It got old after a few lines, and the bland diction didn't help, either. You might want to consider varying your phrases up and perhaps not relying on repetition. There's nothing new to this, really.

    hiraeth.