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hear evil


enemies lie to some but like
to gain assurance theirs is a
hateful and miserable ploy to
destroy your world and to
deliver your worthless corpse
to the devil while usurping
friends and family for cushions
to live with comfort after your
demise

friends like to be but enemies
will never rest

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Option #4

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  • Luckintheshadows
    March 27, 2008
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    Very goopd write, thanks for entering the contest, and sharing your take on the prompt!!!

    Luck.

    • carole21
      March 28, 2008
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      thanks

      thanks for the comments . . I don't quite know what a "gooped up" write is, however . .