Death is the reason we live
We live to die
We die to live.
Death something to look forward to
When your dead you cant feel pain,
and when your dead your never forgotten.
When I die i'll probably be forgotten,
No one to love you,
no one cares for you.
These are the feelings that make us want to die
I want to forget the pain, forget life, forget everything and everyone whos ever hurt me and say
f*** this,(BANG)Im dead.
A contest entry
- [[[Give Me A Broken Rhyme ]]] by hopelessly-broken.
550 points, ended May 20, 2008, 34 entries
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This was written about a month ago. I thought she was leaving me but were still together and now were happy. Have you ever felt this way?
Comments
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i loved it drew, and yes i have felt that way.
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i didnt relaise u'd posted this in my contest
well good luck!
xoxox -
wonderful poem! such strong emotions.
"I want to forget the pain, forget life, forget everything and everyone whos ever hurt me and say
f*** this,(BANG)Im dead."
great ending, i loved it and sadly i can relate...
keep writting, and good luck in the contest
from HB
xoxoxo
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