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The Ouija Board

There is a presence that haunts me
Its now within my sight
It creeps into my sanity
Crazing me with fright

I sleep no more in darkness
Exhausted from the night
I hang on til the morning comes
When I can see the light

My days run in together
I walk around in a daze
Ive lost all sense of reality
A rat caught in a maze

This horror cant continue
It worsens day by day
This thing they call an entity
Wants to have its way

I've bantered verses at it
Rebukeing it in vain
It sickens me to realize that
A ouija board is to blame

If only I would have stopped myself
From joining in that night
I could have saved myself this curse
and from this awful plight

So now Im haunted with remorse
As well as an evil being
That wants me to spend eternity
In pain and always fleeing




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  • funpum
    May 28, 2008

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    Oooh, scary. Ouiji boards have always scared me to death.

    You mention on your author page that you aren't very sure about punctuation. You have several places here where two words have become one, but you haven't punctuated - for example 'Im' 'Ive' 'its'. The easy way to remember how to put the apostrophe in the right place, is to write out the words they would be if shortened - I am. Then write Im. The apostrophe goes in where the letter has been lost. This makes even punctuating 'does not' which becomes 'doesn't' easy.

    It also helps you to know whether there should be an apostrophe in 'its'. This is something that very few people on this site get right. But if you think about what the 'its' means, it's easy! If it means 'it is' then there should be an apostrophe, and it goes in where the 'i' has been lost. But if it's an 'its' which is possessive, ie its house, its bowl, its columns etc then it does NOT have an apostraphe.


  • MysticalRayne
    May 12, 2008

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    Wow I love where you took this ~ it is wonderful I always thought the ouija board was facinating but never tried it out lol Thank you for sharing this


  • Mirrors shard
    April 11, 2008

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    *shivers* chilling. it reminds me of the time i participated in the Ouija Board....the experience haunts me still...


  • michaelynn
    April 2, 2008
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    This is really good...HAUNTING