To love you til' death do us part,
To always look at you and smile.
To grow more and more into your love,
To be upset for awhile.
To remember the things I cherish most,
To remember the things I forgot.
To listen to you when you need time to talk,
To entertain you and what not.
To be your bride,
But most of all wife.
When our lives carry us further,
And I'll be the love of your life.
Many things we must catch up on,
To ignore all the fights we get.
To meet you again with honor,
And understand that we already met.
To take my time with you,
To hold off all of the calls.
To always have you as my baby,
To never make you feel pall.
To be excited every time you call my name,
To hear you when your in need.
To be in every bad or good situation your in,
And take the lead.
To help you not feel pain,
To soak it all up into my body.
To get you to open up even more than before,
And to have you confess your thoughts to me.
To understand how my family feels,
To know that they still exist.
I have things to do in my life,
This is just a preview to my to do list.
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Written December 6th, 2003
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This is super cute poem. I realy liked it. A to-do list...sounded like you were mainly talking about love but a to-do list in love would be a cool thing to write. You gave me an idea lol. I thought this showed alot of feeling, and really doesn't sound like its coming from a 14 year old. You seem to have alot of insight. Keep up the good writes. I liked this one
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great
That is so sweet!!!! I have to agree, with the person before me, I do think that you've out done yourself!!! Great write!! I think I'm going to do all of the things that are in your to do list!! they sound fun!! Great poem!!! -
This is beautiful! I think you've out done yourself! VERY VERY wonderfully written and thought out piece of poetry. Thank you so much for sharing this... best of luck in completing your to do list! *sonya*
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