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The carnation-eater

I am the carnation-eater,

lover of the most delicate flower,

the most feminine of blooms.

I consume at every opportunity

her day-renewed virginity.

Anticipation of opening bud,

appreciation of faint fragrance,

enhanced by gentle dewfall.

The moment comes when sunshine

makes her pink folds spring

slowly, parting in sweetness,

each velvet lip peeling back.

She lays bare her inner secret,

freeing more subtle scents.

Oh to tip-nose her with tenderness…

oh to edge-kiss her gently,

and to tip-lick her with care,

round and round the petal-folds.

At last when neither I nor she

can bear the torment any more –

to suck in the whole bloom,

and eat, and eat my fill!

 

 

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  • paulcreates silver member
    June 20
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    Just a wee sensual. lol


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      June 20
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      If it hadn't been for the start I had in erotica, I wouldn't be writing at all. You've been digging a wee bit in my shocker-locker.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    Bloody hell, how come the carnation didn't bust into flames!!!

    Hot petals, flaming flowers, blazing bracts etc...


  • KayJay
    March 28, 2008

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    As usual, your gift of words draws such an image that one cannot help but find both the beauty and eroticism of your work... Well done!
    Ken


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    March 27, 2008

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    Amera suggested I read this, I am a huge fan and writer of erotica

    And well I am glad I didn't ignore her cause this is brilliance in erotic writing to me

    hot and juicy but sensual and loving and just lovely wording I could eat



    Cindy


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      March 28, 2008
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      Thank you.

      I started out writing erotica and, finding I could write, moved into mainstream poetry and fiction. I still revisit sensual subjects from time to time.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    Beautiful, sensual, sensuous and an incredible read.

    Loved it, all the best...Sue


  • Amera gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    Oh my! You certainly know the right buttons to push when entering a reader’s mind. This is classic beauty in erotic poetry. Truly one of the best I have ever read. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera


  • pantress silver member
    March 27, 2008

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    Something tells me this wasn't about a flower at all.lol very sensually expressed. Good luck in the contest. Jen

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    Thank you for your most beautifully expressed entry, good luck, Josie

    • Mairi bheag gold member
      March 27, 2008
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      Again, Josie, you keep coming up with these contests... how am I to resist?

  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 27, 2008
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    Gotta love those sexy flowers.
    Superb write!

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