This silent Oldsmobile
– a veil upon the moon –
uncannily
unreal
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- Night Tales by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 27, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely immage,
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I am glad to have you wandering through my poems, but you have me foxed as to how you are making your selection. You are unearthing some of my older stuff.
I don't mind - it's flattering, and makes up for the fact that I am not writing at the moment.
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Evocative, telltale.
Catches most of the mood.
Does justice to the picture prompt.
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Ah, you stumbled on an old one. I had a manic compulsion to enter contests at the time I wrote this.
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You seem to be going through an Americanism stage at present but where is the coyote howling ???
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Well the picture was of an Oldsmobile (actually taken in Switzerland)
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Deeply engaging and detailed... x Thanks for sharing and many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.
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Eerie and foreboding feel this has to it. Superb. Good luck in the contest with it
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Ah yes! I see it! The driver less car comes to life and consumes everything in its path. This is a great start for a horror movie.
Love,
Amera
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