Raining cloud never expects anything in return
They act more friendly to the cultivators
The raising sun looks more beautiful
it looks like a friend in need
The setting sun gathers more colours to attract us
like the increasing number of enemies in real situations
Friends you know sail with you in delight and despair
even if your hands are empty
but your heart remains full with affection
Where as enemies dislodge you
once they realize that you own nothing in hands
Beware of enemies they are like dwindling shadows
Author notes
4. Friends come and go but enemies accumulate.
A contest entry
- PIF - quote prompt. by Luckintheshadows.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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Absolutely beautiful comparisons! Thanks for entering and sharing this poem,
Luck.
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