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(Contest) Alone

Menacing,
As it comes nearer
Grumbling

I cower,
Alone

Help...

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 27, 2008

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    A gripping little write... x

    Thanks for sharing and many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.


  • peridotPixi
    March 27, 2008

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    i like how you used this promt to say alone, i like how you say I cower alone, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 27, 2008
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    An eerie piece, intense. Good luck in the contest with it


  • Topaze gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    Nice

    I like this take it was powerful and moving, only ten words! Great job on this piece and my best wishes in contest.