Rarely have I felt this way
I lie.
And I can't say what I want to say
But it's different this time
So tell me how I'm supposed to feel
Help me if you will
Everyday I feel further away
I'm lost here
Love or friendship is that my choice
There must be something more
Losing you would hurt too much
But can I
Maybe I should find my voice
But can't say
And keeping this is killing me
Inside
Everywhere I look
You're not there
Loneliness is tearing at me
You're everywhere
Everything to me
You are
What am I supposed to do
To end this
I know that I'm not right
Without you
So tell me what you want me to be
With or without you
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwink!
I like the kind of jumbled and confused feel of this piece that is reflected in the formatting and tone. Those last two lines sum it all up so well. I can feel a lot of deep emotion in this piece, even more so because it feels so confused. The lack of punctuation and broken up lines really make this piece come through like this, and I like it.
~lost
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