jab aankhen hon kuen ki tarah gehri
jab halak ki koi zamin na ho
to poochh lena meri Muhabbat ki sarhad
Andren bikher jayengi meri Halat batane ko
Subhan allah Subhan allah
tere minar ki dastkhat hai allah tak
kisi ne suni kisi ne ansuni kar di
subhan allah subhan allah....
God is Great...
If you see somebody with staring eyes
and opened mouth as if got surprised
then ask this body the borders of my love
I am sure this body will blast like a Bomb
to tell you the limits of my love
God is Great, God is Great
the pillers of Taj Mahal are tall enough
to knock down Heaven`s Door
some prayers could be heard some not
God is Great, God is Great....
Please criticise or appreciate this poem every comment is welcome
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Beautiful with intensity.
Keep penning...
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Pushpinder, Yes, you've done a superbly well translating into English, though it is difficult to translate metaphores to emulate the original feelings... I still think your Hindi/Urdu version has more depth... keep on writing... can't wait to read your next poem...
mina
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Had a rhythm like a song to it, truly beautifully written... great way of trying to describe the omnipresence of what we call God, and the infinite boundless love how you picture it. wonderful write.
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kamal di nazam likhi hai tusiN Pushpinder ji...bus isay taraN hi likhde rehina...all the best..Sukhdarshan/Grateful
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Array Wah-Wah...Subhan Allah... Intense write... Your words have raged forth and consumed the reader...this is truly beautiful... I so enjoyed reading it.... full of emotion and love for this very special person who inspired you to write this... though it will be very difficult to translate into English to its precision... keep on your pen flowing...
mina
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thank you sir ji, applaus for the children of Back to life
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