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Beginning

Today is the beginning
A risk I took many years ago

When days had light
At night I dreamt

Caution is my step
Horizons always remain

Something exists
Revived from a slumber

Today is the beginning
Only the beginning

critsize, i want to know what i did wrong rather then right

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