HE:
If I kiss you in the dark
would you know its me?
If I sign without my name -
would you yet know me just the same?
If you were blind; across the sea,
to you come in dreamtimes shaded secrecy...
and I kiss you in the dark
would you know it's me?
SHE:
Love which in secrecy declares,
Do you consider that as fair?
And words which merely words caress,
Would I dare put it to the test?
As poems kiss lips muted by Earth,
Light opens eyes, blinded by Birth;
Thus I may answer boldly, YES!:
I would know you, none the less!
myra & secret admirer
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Written February 11th, 2002
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Oh, this is very pretty. Great!
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very cool
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I stay in George ... My name is Myra Lochner ... mobile: 082 378 5262
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Where in SA do you stay??
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Hi, Danni! Are you south African? Please conact me then ...thanks for visiting ...
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HEY HEY, another South African... COOL!!! This is really a sweet poem!! Well done!!
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I see I missed a few guests ... thank you all for your comments. Pontifex, you are always most welcome. Your poetry are strong and brave. MM
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Thanks for visiting Birchwood! I also get such a warm feeling on reading it ...LOL
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Wow .. so touching .. sooo sweet and such a warm feel.
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Hehe... That's the way it works in a community such as this... Interesting titles causes curiosity, leading to more readers.
Love your work.
Me. -
Thanks all! Interesting how a title can carry a poem ... And to think that an entry in a questbook could trigger such a popular (LOL) poem ... What about all my other poems? Don't they deserve a little attention too?
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Very nice
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just by the way you hold me close ...
nothing can steal
your touch from my memories ... oXXXo -
Thus reads as apart of me!
As well as looks like a idea I once had in writing a dewo!
Wanderful job!
Go read my version of 'Secret Lovers'
Michael -
whoever yr secret love is, he is obviously someone very special with damn good taste! thank you, whoever you are
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Thank you, Blu & chasing ... love your work too!
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beautiful :o)
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very sweet
and beautiful
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aiwaz... this love is VERY secret ... he visited my web site, and left this poem there ... I HAD to react! LOL
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oh myra....and yr secret love
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Thanks T, S, TB & D: I am returning your visit right now ...
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Beautiful and SO touching...conveys a feeling of longing that lingers after the read is done. I love the concept behind the poem too
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stunning is correct! a splendid array of beautiful imagery & heartfelt meaning
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Wow! stunning!
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Very, very interesting......
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OH Thanks sidewinder ... only half is mine, though! LOL
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Beautiful write !!!!
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