these are my tears of blue
that i could never be with you
these are my tears of red
for all the blood i'v bled
these are my tears for tomorrow
where i shall bite back my sorrow
these are the tears for the fake
when i pretent my heart doesnt ache
these are my tears of depression
that you are my unrequited obsession
these are my tears of dismay
that you managed to lead my heart astray
these are my tears of heartbreak
where i night i lay wide awake
these are my tears
confirming all my fears
these are my tears
that he will never hear
Author notes
ok well i chose depression and unrequited love
A contest entry
- Emotions Crying Out {Options} by newnoakua.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please comment and check out my other poems
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wow, beautiful. Tears can mean so many different things, and you showed that nicely. I'm gonna ask you to put your option in the authors notes, it was a rule.
"these are my tears of dismay
that you managed to lead my heart astray"
Extreamly heartfelt, great job!
Best of luck in the contest! -
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sorry bout that.
ok i'v put it in the autor notes
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This is really great. I enjoyed reading through this and loved what you have done with the phrase "these are my tears". Great work.
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i love this poem. its really good. it explains mine and my friend dez emotions! i love it
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Brilliant, yet sad
"where i night i lay wide awake" I believe you meant "where *at* night i lay wide awake" other than that typo it looks great.
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this is awsome
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it is touching. it is really sad. but its good. good job.
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wow that is amazing i like it its touching
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