Torn, Between two roads of life,
either one, could spell disaster.
Where do I turn, When all seems lost?
Standing here, My tears shed true.
This tunnel, that feels of gloom,
Walking alone,
out of sight, out of mind,
Come into the light-
And I find you.
Could have sworn,
When I saw (you)
Fireflys danced in the rain
As their wings played,
in the drops of rain.
The Sun that shone,
in rays above the clouds,
are once again,
falling on the ground.
My fears are gone,
You have created the light,
That you now see,
in my eyes.
Forever that be,
this beautiful sight,
Standing here before me
in your charismatic light.
Our love shall embrace,
The deepest shadows-
Turn to gold,
as we settle upon this flight,
Of love.
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This is a great piece of writing here. It is very deep and emotional. Your feelings really came through in this piece. I like your rhyme to and the flow of the piece. Very well done my friend.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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A great poem you've crafted here, dear poet. Beautiful feelings shown and such great imagery.
Well done!
Nela
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Deep It Speek How Life And Love Is And It Dose Not Hold Back On How Some People May Look At It.
All I Can Say Is Keep On Writting Because Im Sure You Could Make It As An Expert Poet -
Simply beautiful! I love your imagery and the
feel of this poem from you! Nice work here my dear sis and thanks for sharing it!
Jeremy0826
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I absolutly love this piece! I really like the first two lines, they ring so true to myself and it sets the mood for the rest of the piece. Extreamly well done! Keep your chin up and keep on writting!
Shannyn
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Very Deep...
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He is your hero... way to go girl!!
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in tears of joy
Wow! This is very touching, well written. I really feel the love. Makes me feel at peace. I enjoyed reading this very much.
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It's nice. But...Too many commas. It isn't bad, though. Thank you for entering my contest. ^.^;
~S~
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thats so beautiful! i wish you the best of luck!
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Aw! how sweet i like this poem very much good write
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