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Lost In The Sky Baby.


Sitting and talking the whole world is fine
Its just you and me tonight see the stars shine!
Laughing and dreaming were in over our heads
Giggling so much our jaws start to hurt
I love you baby don’t you see you showed me the world
Now I am free, colors of the rainbow see the dots glow
My body is here my soul is lost in the sky
I loving being with you please don’t ask me why.
Not a single thing could go wrong right now I am so free
Thanks doll you did this to me, and now I feel so happy!

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  • Scrunter
    March 28, 2008
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    This is so beautiful Savanna. You've penned a wonderful piece here.
    Auntie x


  • whiterabbit.
    March 27, 2008
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    aw this is so cute babe. I'm so glad that you're feeling happy. I love you!!!!!


  • DestiniesTwined
    March 27, 2008
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    This poem is beautiful. It sounds like you're in love my dear. Great write.


  • Puppet Girl
    March 26, 2008
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    aww this is such a wonderful poem i really love it