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Causal Chains

Crash victim seemed an ordinary man
whose karmic thread led to one time, one place,
who won nor great renown, nor state of grace,
no statement made, no grade - an also-ran.

Smash victim seemed an ordinary man
whose function filled a causal void to trace
world's tipping point as joint between Earth, space,
catalyzing universal plan.

Rash victim seemed an ordinary man,
yet filled a fulcrum role on which to base
a change of pace for all the human race
to trip the switch which hitched 'we wish', 'we can !'

While victim's star from radar disappeared
flash accident fresh insights pionneered ...

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  • loopster silver member
    July 28

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    Extraordinary things love to happen to ordinary people!! I like your descriptive style, I like the rhyme pattern, very smart! I like the line, "world's tipping point as joint between Earth, space catalyzing universal plan." Way cool

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 28

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    This was really interesting..
    The image was unique and thought provoking..
    You did a really good job.. Thanks for sharing..

    Angel

  • janejainejayne gold member
    April 6

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    Victimized!

    Are we all victims?
    I enjoyed this but could not find myself!
    I think there are more victims to explore here!

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